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verbs,  adjectives,  subject-predicate  phrases,  etc.  It
               cannot be omitted. In the three examples above, the   verbs, "给" used as a preposition cannot serve as the
               components following N2 are attributive phrases and   causative verb V1. Therefore, "给" in Examples 3 and 4
               cannot  function  as  V2.  The  omitted V2  should  be   should be replaced with "使."
               complemented based on the context.
                                                                4.     Misplaced Components
               2.     Misplaced Components                      Example 1: 运动可 使她健 维 。
               Example 1: 绝对 有让你感 满足和快乐。                        Correction: 运动可 使她维 健 。
               Correction: 绝对 让你感 满足和快乐。                        Example  2:    你不想当自己的子女 观者的
               Example  2:  他常常带 请中国朋友来我们                       话,千万不要给 子 观的 响。
                。                                               Correction:    你不想让自己的子女当 观者的
               Correction:  他常常带/ 请中国朋友来我们                      话,千万不要给 子 观的 响。
                。                                               Example  3:  如果我们养成青 年的 好的习惯,
               In both examples, there is an erroneous addition of the   那么 需要保   整洁。
               causative  verb  V1.  Due  to  insufficient  mastery  of   Correction:  如果我们想让青 年养成 好的习
               double-object verbs, students may create sentences   惯,那么 需要保   整洁.
               with  semantic  repetition  or  confusion  between   Misplacement  of  components,  especially  in  the
               possessive relationships and causative meanings. In   positioning of certain elements in a sentence, is one of
               Example 1, if the intention is to express a causative   the  common  errors  made  by  foreign  learners  of
               meaning, the term indicating possession "有" should   Chinese.  In  Example  1,  the  placement  of  V2  is
               be  omitted.  In  Example  2,  retaining  one  causative   incorrect and needs adjustment to follow the structure
               verb is sufficient.                                of  N1+V1+N2+V2.  Examples  2  and  3  involve
                                                                misplaced elements that result in the omission of V1.
               3.     Mixed Components                          By adding the causative verb, rearrange the positions
               Example 1: 在这个动 里,国王使 人说大 是                      of  N2  "自己的子女"  and  "青 年"  after  their
               什么样。                                             respective V1 "让" to restore the correct structure.
               Correction:  在这个动 里,国王让 人说大 是
               什么样的。                                            5.     Component Errors
               Example 2: 妈妈使女儿  晚上 一杯 奶。                       Example 1: 读书使她减  的压力。
               Correction: 妈妈让女儿  晚上 一杯 奶。                      Correction: 读书使她减轻  的压力。
               Example 3: 她爱好运动, 其是在 附近跑 ,                      Example  2:   为读书 让她经验别的 界,
                为跑 给她起精 来。                                      她爱看书。
               Correction:  她爱好运动, 其是在 附近跑 ,                    Correction:   为读书 让她体验别的 界,
                为跑 使她打起精 来。                                     她爱看书。
               Example  4:  咖 碱给人难   ,  小心点                     In  Examples  1  and  2,  the  double-object  sentence
               儿。                                               structure N1+V1+N2+V2 is already complete, and an
               Correction:  咖 碱使人难   ,  小心点                     additional  object  N3  is  introduced,  representing  the
               儿。                                               direct object of V2's action. Therefore, V2 should be a
               In  this  section,  mixed  components  refer  to  the   transitive verb. In Example 1, "减" should be changed
               interchangeability of the causative verbs "使" and "让  to  "减轻"  to  form  the  collocation  "减轻压力."  In
               " with the verb "给" in double-object constructions.   Example 2, the noun "经验" should be replaced with
               Both "使" and "让" convey causative meanings, but   the verb "体验."
               with different emphases. "使" emphasizes the action
               itself,  independent  of  the  subject's  subjective   6.  Structural Errors
               intentions, while "让" emphasizes the action initiated   (1)   Should Use Double-Object Constructions but
               by the subject's intentions. Examples 1 and 2 involve   Not Used
               commands or requests from the "国王" (king) and "妈  Example 1: I am deeply moved by her attitude.
               妈"  (mother)  to  the  recipients,  making  "让"  more   Correction: Her attitude moves me deeply.
               appropriate  than  "使."  The  use  of  "给"  as  a  verb   Example 2: The current society is very challenging for
               represents causing someone to obtain something or   smokers.
               experience  something.  While  similar  to  causative   Correction: The current society makes smokers feel

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